Erny
Baron
I disagree, I think this one shows progress. This is the first of your pictures that makes virtue of your own limitations, there is form and composition here. I like it and it shows where you should be headed. Dare I say there is even a slight reference to Moore poking through. You should consider adding wax or chalk and water colour to your sketching I think it would compliment your style.
My own style is chaotic and I don't practice nearly enough so please know my comments come from a good place.

My own style is chaotic and I don't practice nearly enough so please know my comments come from a good place.